Quick Reference
| Elements | Guiding Principles | Key Points |
|---|---|---|
| Magic System | Must have clear rules | Limitations are more important than power |
| World Setting | Internally consistent | Every rule has a reason |
| Races/Creatures | Unique and logical | Avoid mere human reskins |
| Historical Depth | At least three generations of history | The past affects the present |
| Political Structure | Clear distribution of power | Conflict has roots |
Core Principles
Sanderson's Laws of Magic
First Law: The reader's satisfaction from magic is directly proportional to how well they understand it
- If magic is to solve problems, the reader must understand its rules
- Soft magic systems (mysterious) are used for atmosphere and wonder
- Hard magic systems (clear rules) are used to solve problems
Second Law: Limitations are more interesting than power
- Powerful magic requires powerful costs
- Limitations create conflict and strategy
- A perfect system cannot create drama
Third Law: Before adding something new, expand what already exists
- Deepening existing elements is better than adding new ones
- Interconnected systems are stronger than isolated ones
- Complexity should grow organically
Magic System Design
Hard magic systems (clear rules)
Essential Elements:
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Energy Source
- Where does magic come from?
- Is it finite or infinite?
- Can it be exhausted?
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Rules of Use
- Who can use it? How is it acquired?
- What conditions are required?
- What limitations are there?
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Cost/Consequences
- What is the cost of using magic?
- What happens with overuse?
- Are there long-term effects?
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Possible and Impossible
- What can magic do?
- Clearly define what it cannot do
- Where are the boundaries?
Example Framework:
魔法系统:元素操控
来源:每个人出生时拥有一种元素亲和
规则:只能操控自己的元素,需要该元素存在于周围
限制:精神疲劳,过度使用导致元素反噬
代价:使用魔法时消耗生命力,需要休息恢复
禁忌:不能创造元素,只能操控;不能操控生物体内的元素
Soft magic systems (mystery)
Characteristics:
- The rules are not fully known to the reader
- Used more for atmosphere and wonder
- Should not conveniently resolve the main conflict
- Maintain mystery and awe
Use Cases:
- Ancient magic, partially lost
- Divine power, beyond mortal understanding
- Background wonder and worldbuilding
- Subplots that do not affect the main resolution
Worldbuilding Framework
Geography and Environment
Must consider:
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Terrain
- How do mountains, rivers, and oceans affect civilizations?
- How does climate shape culture?
- How does resource distribution affect the economy?
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Ecosystem
- What does the food chain look like?
- How do magical creatures adapt to their environment?
- How do humans/other intelligent races survive?
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The impact of magic on geography
- How does magic change nature?
- Are there landmarks created by magic?
- What traces have magical disasters left behind?
Society and culture
Hierarchical structure:
Political level:
- Forms of government (monarchy, democracy, theocracy, etc.)
- How is power transferred?
- How does magic affect politics?
- Conflicts between different factions
Economic level:
- What is traded? Why?
- Currency system
- How does magic affect the economy?
- Resource scarcity
Social level:
- Class structure
- Race relations
- The status of magic users
- Education and the spread of knowledge
Cultural level:
- Religion and belief
- Art and entertainment
- Festivals and traditions
- Values and taboos
Historical depth
At least three generations of history:
Contemporary(at the time the story takes place):
- What is the current situation?
- Main conflicts and problems
- Main forces and figures
Parent generation(30-50 years ago):
- What events shaped the contemporary era?
- What do the older generation remember?
- Legacy issues
Grandparent generation(60-100 years ago):
- Legends and stories
- Lost knowledge
- Historical trauma
Ancient times(even further back):
- Myths and legends
- The rise and fall of civilizations
- Planting seeds for the contemporary setting
Race and creature design
Intelligent races
Avoid single traits: ❌ All elves are elegant and noble ❌ All dwarves are greedy and irascible ❌ All orcs are savage and warlike
Create depth: ✅ Internal diversity (different cultures, values) ✅ Individual differences (varied personalities) ✅ Historical complexity (both good and bad history)
Racial traits should have reasons:
- How do physiological traits help survival?
- Where do cultural traits come from?
- The history of relations with other races
Magical creatures
Design principles:
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Ecological niche
- What is its role in the ecosystem?
- What does it eat? What eats it?
- How does it reproduce?
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Source of magic
- Why is there magic?
- How does magic help it survive?
- What costs or limitations are there?
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Relationship with humans
- Dangerous or useful?
- Can it be domesticated?
- How do humans deal with it?
Common pitfalls
❌ Over-explaining
Problem: spending chapters explaining the worldbuilding, stopping the story from moving forward
Solution:
- Show the worldbuilding in action
- Only explain what the characters need to know
- Let readers piece some things together themselves
- Information should serve the plot or characters
❌ Inconsistent rules
Problem: Magic/world rules change for plot convenience
Solution:
- Establish all major rules in advance
- Track established rules
- Exceptions need early hints
- Let characters solve problems creatively within limits
❌ European medieval default setting
Problem: All fantasy is a copy of the European Middle Ages
Solution:
- Explore other cultures and periods
- Mix multiple cultural elements
- Create unique social structures
- Consider how magic changes social development
❌ The chosen one trap
Problem: The protagonist is special because of prophecy/lineage, not actions
Solution:
- Make the protagonist special through choices
- Even with a prophecy, make them work hard to fulfill it
- Subvert or deconstruct the trap
- Focus on character growth, not talent
Fantasy subgenres
High fantasy (epic fantasy)
- A completely fictional world
- Good versus evil
- Epic scale and stakes
- Magic is part of the world
Low fantasy
- Real world + magical elements
- Smaller personal stakes
- Magic is rare and mysterious
- A more grounded tone
Urban fantasy
- Modern city setting
- A hidden magical world
- Usually has detective/mystery elements
- The collision of two worlds
Dark fantasy
- Morally gray
- Horror and violence elements
- Antihero protagonist
- Harsher consequences
Integration with Novel-Writer commands
When /specify executes
- Define core world elements (magic, races, geography)
- Identify the fantasy subgenre
- List the major rules that must be established
- Plan the pacing of information reveals
During /plan During
- Map how world elements influence the plot
- Plan the reveal of the magic system
- Design the collision of different cultures
- Ensure consistency of world rules
At /write When
- Show the world in action, not through infodumps
- Let characters react to world elements
- Use sensory details to make the world vivid
- Maintain consistency with established rules
During /analyze During
- Check consistency of world rules
- Verify the logic of the magic system
- Confirm that all world elements have a purpose
- Ensure the setting serves the story
Worldbuilding checklist
- The magic system has clear rules and limitations
- Geography and climate influence culture and plot
- At least three generations of historical depth
- Multiple political factions have clear motivations
- Economy and trade have a logical foundation
- Races/cultures have internal diversity
- Magical creatures have ecological niches and purposes
- Religions/belief systems have influence
- Social structures have clear classes and mobility
- All rules remain consistent throughout the story
Information revelation strategy
Iceberg principle
Created vs. shown:
- Create 100%, but only show 10-20%
- Readers don't need to know everything
- Deep creation builds confidence and consistency
- The author knows more than is shown
Timing of revelation
Chapter One:
- Basic worldview (not exhaustive explanation)
- A compelling magical/fantasy element
- The protagonist's place in the world
First 25%:
- Core magic system rules
- Major races/cultures
- Central conflict and its world roots
Middle section:
- Deepen established elements
- Complicate world politics
- Reveal historical influences
Later section:
- Connect all world threads
- Reveal deep history
- Show how world elements resolve conflict
Reader expectations
What fantasy readers want:
- Immersive, believable worlds
- Consistent and interesting magic systems
- Complex cultures and politics
- Fresh takes on classic tropes
- The world feels larger than the story
What frustrates fantasy readers:
- Inconsistent world rules
- Convenient magic
- Thin European medieval copycat
- Worlds lacking depth
- Info-dumping instead of organic revelation
Remember: Great worldbuilding is the foundation of the story, not the goal. The world should serve the characters and plot, and the characters' actions should be shaped and constrained by the world's rules. Balancing depth with narrative flow is key.