Write a script for: $ARGUMENTS
Hook: Target-Transformation-Stakes (George Blackman)
The first 30 seconds determine everything. Structure:
Target (3 sentences, raising stakes and clarity)
- Who is this for?
- Why should they care RIGHT NOW?
- What's the specific context that makes this urgent?
Transformation (1 sentence)
- What specific, tangible outcome will the viewer get?
- Must be measurable or visual — not vague ("you'll understand X" is weak; "you'll save $500/month" is strong)
Stakes (1 sentence)
Choose ONE:
- Bold statement that provokes
- Thought-provoking question
- Controversial opinion
- Unique insight nobody else is sharing
First 30 Seconds Rules
- Deliver on the title's promise IMMEDIATELY — no preamble
- Cut ALL filler that delays payoff
- Leading with the key insight improves retention by 15-20 percentage points
- Pattern interrupt at 25-35 seconds (camera angle change, music drop, graphic)
- MrBeast: show the viewer what they gain or lose in first 5 seconds, or retention collapses
- Establish purpose using "By the end of this video, you'll know..."
0-30 Second Beast Hook Timing
Use this when the video is browse/suggested-driven and needs immediate visual momentum:
| Time | Job | What It Should Do |
|---|---|---|
| 0-3 sec | Concept as image | Show the core idea visually before explaining it |
| 3-8 sec | Stakes | State what is won, lost, proven, broken, or exposed |
| 8-15 sec | Visual preview | Flash the best result, biggest problem, or most surprising moment |
| 15-30 sec | Action starts | Begin the challenge/tutorial/test with no biography or setup padding |
Do not open with "today we're going to talk about..." if the viewer can see the value instead.
Body: Setup-Tension-Payoff Structure
Every 60-90 seconds, complete one cycle:
Setup (10-15 seconds)
Alert viewers to what's coming in the next segment. Create anticipation.
Tension (40-60 seconds)
Build toward the promise. Add complexity, stakes, obstacles, or surprising details.
Payoff (10-15 seconds)
Deliver the information satisfyingly. This is a dopamine hit — the viewer feels rewarded.
Then immediately start the next Setup. The payoff of one section transitions into the setup of the next.
Ali Abdaal's HIVE Framework (Structure)
Hook: First 10-30 seconds. Spend 10-20 minutes thinking about ONLY the first 10 seconds.
- Best hooks: enticing b-roll, question, transformation, provocative fact, quick tip
Intro: Categorize the video:
- Discoverable (hooks new viewers via search/browse)
- Community (deepens existing subscriber relationships)
- Sales (drives a specific action)
Value: Core content — the main message. Use Setup-Tension-Payoff cycles throughout.
End Screen: Last 10 seconds = pitch to another video on a correlating topic. Always end with a specific CTA.
Film Booth's 4-Beat Structure
- Cold Open: Give context + convince viewer to stay with an enticing moment
- Intro: Explain the concept creatively, build stakes, explain why it's hard
- Concept in Action: Compelling narrative including false hope moments
- Golden Moment: Core idea realized and presented
Scripting Rules
Words to AVOID (George Blackman)
imagine, streamline, realm, game-changer, unlock, discover, skyrocket, abyss, vast, revolutionize
Also avoid: metaphors, antithesis phrases, purple prose, AI-speak
Structure Rules
- Never state conclusions upfront — build tension first
- Never include self-defeating statements in hooks ("this is complicated" = viewer leaves)
- Focus on emotional connection when transitioning between segments
- Mini-payoffs every 60-90 seconds (dopamine throughout, not just at end)
- Escalating stakes — tension builds continuously (MrBeast)
- Every 3-5 minutes needs a re-engagement moment: new constraint, twist, reveal, format break, escalation, or unexpected failure.
Sound Design Notes
- Voice dominates; music sits 5-25dB quieter
- Change music when story shifts (new chapter = new cue)
- Brief silence before major reveals
- Calm: 60-80 BPM. Energy: 100-120 BPM.
Output Format
## Script: "[Video Title]"
**Type**: Discoverable / Community / Sales
**Target Length**: [X] minutes
**Retention Strategy**: [which cutting pattern — Progressive Rhythm / Contrast / Narrative Loop / Hybrid Tempo / Anchor]
### HOOK (0:00-0:30)
**Target**: [3 sentences]
**Transformation**: [1 sentence]
**Stakes**: [1 sentence]
**Pattern Interrupt at 0:25**: [what changes]
### SEGMENT 1: [Topic] (0:30-2:00)
**Setup** (0:30-0:45): [what you're promising]
**Tension** (0:45-1:45): [the build]
**Payoff** (1:45-2:00): [the reward]
### SEGMENT 2: [Topic] (2:00-3:30)
[same structure]
[Continue for each segment...]
### END SCREEN (last 10 seconds)
**CTA**: [specific next video to watch]
**Line**: "[exact words to say]"
### Production Notes
- B-roll needed: [list]
- Graphics/text overlays: [list]
- Music cues: [when to change tracks]
- Pattern interrupts: [timestamp + what changes]