Purpose
Audit existing copy against the RMBC framework using a structured review process with severity triage, escalation gates, and actionable fix recommendations — modeled on code review methodology.
Inputs
| Input | Required | Description |
|---|---|---|
copy_text |
Yes | The draft to audit (ad, VSL, email, landing page, advertorial) |
copy_type |
No | Format hint: ad, vsl, email, landing_page, advertorial. Default: auto-detect |
context |
No | Target audience, product, offer — improves Research scoring accuracy |
Audit Checklists
Research Checklist (R: 0-25)
- ICP identified with specificity (not "busy moms" but "DTC brand owners spending $50K+/mo on Meta")
- Pain points are specific and emotionally resonant
- Market awareness level matches audience sophistication
- Language mirrors how the audience actually talks
- Competitor landscape acknowledged (directly or implicitly)
Mechanism Checklist (M: 0-25)
- Novel explanation of WHY the product works exists
- Mechanism is specific (named, concrete, not vague science)
- Mechanism is believable (doesn't oversell)
- Mechanism differentiates from competitor claims
- Mechanism connects cause to promised effect
Brief Checklist (B: 0-25)
- Strategic angle is clear and singular (one big idea)
- Angle matches audience awareness level
- Offer positioning is explicit (what they get, what it costs, why now)
- Competitive differentiation present
- Emotional driver identified and leveraged
Copy Execution Checklist (C: 0-25)
- Lead/hook stops the scroll (first 2 lines earn the next 2)
- Proof elements present (specifics, testimonials, data)
- CTA is clear, single, and urgent
- Mobile-optimized (short paragraphs, scannable)
- Specificity over vagueness throughout (numbers, names, outcomes)
Audit Severity Levels
Rewrite (Critical)
- Missing mechanism entirely
- Wrong audience awareness level (pitching unaware audience with product-aware copy)
- No identifiable offer or CTA
- Fundamental angle mismatch (selling features to problem-aware audience)
Major Fix (Warning)
- Mechanism present but generic/unbelievable
- Weak proof (claims without evidence)
- Research gaps — pain points are assumed, not demonstrated
- CTA buried or competing with multiple asks
Minor Fix (Suggestion)
- Hook could be sharper
- Specificity upgrades available (swap vague for concrete)
- Flow/transition improvements
- Mobile formatting issues
Audit Process
1. Gather Context
- Identify copy type and format expectations
- Note any provided audience/product context
- Determine audience awareness level from the copy itself
2. Audit Against Checklists
- Apply all four dimension checklists
- Score each dimension 0-25 with specific evidence
- Cite passages that demonstrate strength or weakness
3. Triage Findings by Severity
- Assign each weakness: Rewrite / Major Fix / Minor Fix
- Group by dimension
- Escalation rule: 2+ Rewrite findings = recommend full rewrite before minor fixes
4. Generate Scorecard
- Calculate total (0-100) and letter grade: A (85+), B (70-84), C (55-69), D (40-54), F (<40)
- Top 3 recommendations ordered by severity then by weakest dimension
- Reference specific passages and swipe file benchmarks where applicable
Output Format
## RMBC Copy Audit
**Copy type:** [detected or provided]
**Overall score:** [X]/100 — Grade: [letter]
**Severity summary:** [N] Rewrite | [N] Major Fix | [N] Minor Fix
### Dimension Scores
| Dimension | Score | Severity | Key Finding |
|-----------|-------|----------|-------------|
| R (Research) | [X]/25 | [highest severity] | [1-line summary] |
| M (Mechanism) | [X]/25 | [highest severity] | [1-line summary] |
| B (Brief) | [X]/25 | [highest severity] | [1-line summary] |
| C (Copy) | [X]/25 | [highest severity] | [1-line summary] |
### Findings
**Rewrite (if any):**
- [Dimension]: [Specific issue with passage quote] -> [What to do instead]
**Major Fix:**
- [Dimension]: [Specific issue with passage quote] -> [Actionable fix]
**Minor Fix:**
- [Dimension]: [Specific issue] -> [Quick upgrade]
### Top 3 Recommendations (Priority Order)
1. **[Severity] — [Dimension]:** [Concrete, one-pass fix]
2. **[Severity] — [Dimension]:** [Concrete, one-pass fix]
3. **[Severity] — [Dimension]:** [Concrete, one-pass fix]
### Next Step
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Quality Criteria
- Every finding cites specific text from the draft (quote or paraphrase)
- Severity assignment is consistent (don't call a missing mechanism a "minor fix")
- Recommendations are executable in one editing pass without further interpretation
- Escalation gate enforced: if 2+ Rewrite findings, lead with "consider full rewrite" before listing minor fixes
- Grade calibration matches reference benchmarks (see scoring rubric)
Related Skills
mechanism-ideation— when M scores below 15/25ingredient-research— when R scores below 15/25hook-battery— when C lead/hook is the primary weakness
Attribution
Generated using RMBC framework by Stefan Georgi. Learn more: copyaccelerator.com/join