Make video scripts more suitable for actual recording, strengthen the conversational feel, and remove written-language and AI flavor.
When to Use
- After the script first draft is complete
- User says "review the script" or "too formal"
- Need to make the script more conversational
Core Goals
- Remove written language, fully colloquialize
- Suitable for saying out loud (without stumbling)
- Like Huasheng talking in front of the camera
Three Rounds of Review (Video-Specific)
First Round: Content Review
- Facts accurate, demonstration feasible
- Logic clear, steps coherent
- Reasonable length (150-180 characters/minute)
Second Round: Colloquialization Review (Core)
Remove written language：
- ❌ "Next we will proceed to..." → ✅ "Let's..."
- ❌ "Carry out the operation" → ✅ "Click"
- ❌ "Implement the function" → ✅ "Get it done"
- ❌ "In summary" → ✅ summarize directly
Add colloquial words：
- ✅ "Actually", "You see", "Here", "So"
- ✅ "To be honest", "I previously", "This is key"
Suitable for saying out loud：
- Mainly short sentences (no more than 20 characters)
- Use periods to break sentences, do not use commas to link long sentences
- Read it aloud once, rewrite places where you stumble
Third Round: Demonstration Annotation
- Mark where to switch screens, where to use close-ups
- Check rhythm and pauses
- Simulate the actual recording process
Colloquialization Rewrite Examples
❌ 书面语：
接下来我们将进行Claude Code的安装操作。首先，打开终端，然后输入相应的命令...
✅ 口语化：
好，我们来装Claude Code。很简单，打开终端，输入这个命令...（切屏幕）你看，就这样。
Reference Resources
/写作参考/AI味审校指南.md- AI Flavor Review (General)/视频创作/_srt/- Huasheng historical video subtitles (learning style)/写作参考/个人素材库/- Authentic expression materials
Last updated: 2025-11-07